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The saviour aboard the r.s.s legacy
Reader x Jim Hawkins
Pain, that’s all I feel as I fall through an exploding planet, with a cut across my stomach. As I’m falling backwards I see a boy on a poorly made solar board, trying to reach me, crying the boy was James plantes Hawkins or as everyone knows him as Jim. Now what was happening? Oh yeah, I’m falling to my death, on treasure planet. Remember how people tell you your life flashes before your eyes when you’re about to die, well they were right I saw my birth, my 4th birthday, my 8th Christmas even how I got myself in this mess in the first place.
I was at home with my bag of gizmos and doohickies I was currently working on a portal to travel to different parts of the world so I don’t need pay to travel by plane originally it was going to be a portal into the movie ‘treasure planet’ to save people but, that’s was back when I was like seven years old now I’m a 15 year old. So I went to my room and packed my (f/c) duffle with things I might need like a couple of dresses, a few pairs of baggy pants, some t-shirts, undergarments, socks, shoes, phone of course oh, I forgot, my name’s ____________ _____________ and I have (h/l) (h/c) and (e/c). I finally finished making the portal after years of work. “Well at least that’s out of the way” I said to myself I change into a (f/c) summer dress with a pair of (2ndf/c) flats. I picked up my (f/c) duffle bag and flipped the switch on the portal. The portal glowed a beautiful blue. As I was about to step through I grabbed my big brim sun hat with the (f/c) ribbon on it. I stepped into the portal letting the colour surround me but, then everything went wrong, the alarm went off and the portal glowed a terrifying red I don’t know why but I threw my bag out of the portal and then, just as I was about to run out of the portal everything went black.
I woke up, I was looking at the ceiling when I opened my eyes, I felt something on my head when I went to touch it, a hand stopped me. I looked to see someone I would never imagine to see in a million years, Sarah Hawkins, as I tried to sit up she pushed me back by my shoulders and held me down “it’s alright, I just found you lying in the ally and brought you to my inn, understood?” she asked I nodded my head as she let me go and sat down next to me on a chair “now then, what might your name be?” “___________ ____________” “okay, Miss _____________ do you know where you’re from?” “No, nor do I have a home or any money if you were going to ask that next” she look surprised at the moment I seem calm but really, I’m scared shitless “I have an idea; if you work for me I’ll let you live her, deal?” she held out her hand I sat up slowly and shook her hand “deal”.
2 weeks late
“Miss __________, my juice” “here you are Miss Dunwoody.” I said as I poured her a glass of purp juice “thank you dear” “not a problem” I said as I picked up a pile of dirty dishes ‘two weeks at this place and I’m only a little used to the technology, damn’ I walked into the kitchen “ah, __________ there you are can you please wait tables 3, 6, 4 and2 for me” she asked I nodded as I put the dishes down “hey miss Hawkins?” “_______ How may time do I have to say it call me Sarah” “Sarah, how come I’ve never met your son, James?” she looked a little sad “well, he’s got a record of misbehaviour” “oh” she still looked sad, I looked for something to distract her then I noticed that dr.Doppler was at his table and his food was ready I picked up the tray with the food on it and said ”Sarah, could you give dr.Doppler his food? I’m sure he would like to see you” I smiled then she smiled and took the tray “thank you ___________ you’re like the daughter I never had” as I grabbed the dishes with food for the customers I remembered how Sarah gave me a dress similar to hers but in (f/c). I just served tabels3, 6, 4 and 2, I walked over to miss Dunwoody with a pitcher of purp juice. Then I heard, ”JIM!” I turned my head to the door that’s when I saw him.
To be continued
yeah my first reader insert have fun i don't own treasure planet or you
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PaigeUchigami Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014
This seems really cool so far! Can you please continue it? I'd love to read more! :D
TheLostArtOfLizzy Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist
moonlightwolf15 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh ok. I guess I could
PaigeUchigami Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014
Thank you! :D
SuperHedgehogirls Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
continue plz~!!
moonlightwolf15 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll try
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animemangas Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
OMG!!!! You must continue!!!! ASAP!!!! I love it!!
moonlightwolf15 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Will try
slysonicfan Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I can't wait to next part, but I have to and I will :3
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